some feedback from the reader
Its okay Farrah, I understand your job is demanding. That's why I went ahead and posted my bio and Sam did a wonderful job on my avatar and banner and she was even sweet enough to change my name.
I'd like to comment on the past threads and current. I was moved to tears with how much EMOTION all of you placed throughout the past months, especially with the death of Foxfire. I could see everything so perfectly and what I liked was how each of the characters dealt differently, which made it more realistic. Farrah had me with her portrayal of Morgan with Blaze's death and the guilt plus Haleigh, Alexis, Cam, etc.
I liked how Lexi put a twist on Hal with a new appearance. I thought that was clever and unexpected in dealing with her death from Spellbinder. I also enjoyed how the reader got to see how Cameron felt deep down without the bravado and his attempts to reconcile with Alison. And Alexis, I thought Sam's portrayal here was outstanding and even the new power. It showed how each of the characters had grown together.
And as always I love Ororo and the new image she received for an Avatar. She's been a huge impact on the Six, guiding them and warning them of the murky waters ahead. Farrah's portrayal of her is right on, its almost like reading the comic itself or seeing the cartoon.
Bane pushed the limits with his provocative self. A bit of a mystery, at times I was left in confusion with who he was or what his intent really was. I was surprised at how Rich added the sex scenes lol. It added some spice while the others created the raw emotion. A nice combination I thought.
I was surprised Erika King returned to Limbo, but it did make sense. I was impressed how Brandon played her. Her code of honor and her true self were key characteristics in her. I liked how she had the bad side at the end, another nice twist.
All in all, I liked what I read. I also enjoyed the battle with Morgan and Haleigh, nicely done. I look forward to the next section.
