rundown
okay, this IS Sam's storyline..but there are a few OVER ALL plot /character development issues i want to deal with here as well..and i want them dealt with in this storyline.
a) ErikaKing is no longer intregal to the storyline...she needs to be phased out. She can return at a later date but we need to trime down the number of "allies" involved. Ororo would not be needed here as well and that is why she is back in Limbo. Karen is here ONLY because of her link to Helena...and that will provide some of the reason that Morgan agree's to help alexis. I'm going to begin presentation of a different aspect of Morgan's personality now....she's already done so by reaching out to Alexis in a show of solidarity..but there's more to come.
b) sam, you have got to make sure you dont let the story get away from you. timing is everything.
c) cameron king, while excellently played, is NOT going to be able to meld into The Six with his current attitude. he needs to be checked...and he needs to get a clue. if he doesnt...he will be more liability than asset. the CHARACTER is obviously engaging and an attention getter...but if this team is going to be able to co-exist under one roof, HE needs to be developed further..in a POSITIVE direction Alexis and Morgan are building a bridge, Alison is showing a different side of herself..yet Cameron is continuing to act as though he has the drop on everyone. it should be obvious by now that he's pissing off and alienating the very people who could help him get to the next level. you may not LIKE the way i bombard him with problems..BUT if a character is going to be presented that way..then its only fair to test and see where the breaking point is. if you want it to stop, then start developing him more. he could be a GREAT asset to the team..much like Brenthon was to MoE.
d) sam, if your going to keep things going..you've GOT to make sure you "direct and lead in" with your posts...as it stands right now...your not doing that.
c) rich...dont spend too much time devouring everyone with your character's powers that he winds up dead before he even gets a chance to join the six. there has to be SOME semblance of a "bridge" for him to connect with alexis, morgan and alison.....and cameron as well.
d) brandon, you CAN make a dummy account for Recall if you like. BUT she is to stay in the "background" until such time she is needed for a storyline.